You know, this could make a really great chaptered story. It's bittersweet, in a way. Like obviously she's sad the relationship is over, but she still has feelings for him. I actually had to go back a few times, because now that I think about it, maybe she was never in a relationship? Like, she had a crush on him and they were really good friends.
But now I'm thinking she's talking about a female friend. Like, they were best friends and somehow drifted apart. If your intention was to make it this vague, job well done! Maybe I'm just a moron. But I do like how you wrote it. No specific details, short and to the point. Or maybe I just was over-analyzing it. Either way, great job [:
Sorry for the obnoxious length of this comment, too :3
But now I'm thinking she's talking about a female friend. Like, they were best friends and somehow drifted apart. If your intention was to make it this vague, job well done! Maybe I'm just a moron. But I do like how you wrote it. No specific details, short and to the point. Or maybe I just was over-analyzing it. Either way, great job [:
Sorry for the obnoxious length of this comment, too :3