July 11th, 2011 at 11:55pm
Judging for “So You Think You Can Write?”
10/10 for Originality
Let me just say you’re a great writer. I like how you used the picture with the television as a sort-of display case….you really connected the two pictures well.
5/5 for Quality
A comment isn’t really needed, now is there? :)
15/15 for Ability to Incorporate Prompt
You used two pictures, the television one and the heart one.
10/10 for Capturing My Attention
I really like your layout, and your description at the beginning made me want more. :)
10/10 for Vocab/Spelling/Grammar
I didn’t catch any mistakes.
Total Points: 50 (+2 for using three picture titles) = 52 points from Moonlit.Memories for Round Two
UR AN AWESOME WRITER!! NOW FINISH "SWEETIE YOU HAD ME." :D