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  • shbrnk

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    awwww this is sooo adorable <3
    February 26th, 2014 at 02:38pm
  • newyork_xo

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    So cuteeee!
    January 14th, 2012 at 08:21pm
  • alustreya

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    HALEJGAEDGH where to start where to start.
    First off, "Opie," that's just adorable.
    And really, that wasn't funny. I really thought he was gonna break up with her.
    But overall, I don't know what to say. This was just cute and fluffy - and hot air balloon. How random ahhah!
    October 5th, 2011 at 07:36am
  • Kelseylynnf

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    So...I was just looking through your other stories and this was SO adorable!!!
    Even though you don't write cute and fluffy all the time, this was AMAZING. <3
    I was worried because I thought something bad was going to happen when Alex was keeping more to himself, but was all happy when he proposed.
    I loved every bit of this story. Great job!!
    July 11th, 2011 at 12:28am
  • heyit'sjordan_

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    Awh!
    So cute!(:
    June 16th, 2011 at 03:01am
  • Kinkeh Dinosaurs

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    That was honestly super adorable. :3 I loved everything about it... and I think that you should start writing for fluffy stuff, you're very good at it.
    I still have a smile on my face just thinking about how cute it was. (:
    June 15th, 2011 at 08:39am
  • JaffaCakes

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    I love this, I think it seems like the the perfect fairytale, if only aye! I love your writing your very talented!! :) xx
    June 14th, 2011 at 08:34pm
  • Muzik.Freek

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    This was the perfect start to my day because of how adorable it was. I totally think that you should write some more fluffy stuff because you are good at it. I found myself with a huge smile on my face the whole time I was reading this. (: ♥
    June 14th, 2011 at 04:51pm
  • letthewallsbreakdown

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    This was absolutely adorable. Two thumbs up. :)
    June 12th, 2011 at 05:03pm
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    I like it. :)
    June 12th, 2011 at 03:06am
  • Kaybeanna

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    I have this huge smile on my face right now from this story. I love the way you write Alex as a total prick but this was so awesome and lovely. I love it to death. <3
    June 11th, 2011 at 11:59pm
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    You're right, you don't really write cute and fluffy. But I think you should more often because you rock at it! This was so adorable! I loved all of it! It was all short and to the point but it gave the reader enough information to know enough about the character. I was actually really concerned when Alex got quiet, but that was the cutest ending ever! Just the fact that he played golf with Ophelia's dad says a lot about how serious Alex was. And it was just too cliche and adorable! I loved every second of it!
    June 11th, 2011 at 12:51am
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