June 16th, 2011 at 03:47pm
This is for the Underground Competition
10/10 Following the writing prompt.
At first I had a hard time trying to figure out how the prompt would fit in there, but alas it did! I thought this was very well written. You added a lot instead of just focusing on the picture, but it all related back to it in different ways and I loved that.
9/10 Grammar and Spelling.
There were only a couple mistakes.
10/10 Neatness.
I had absolutely no trouble reading this.
10/10 Original Layout/Creativity
This was definitely creative & it had a lot of dynamics to it. The layout was original as well, the picture really fit well with the story and it was interesting.
5/5 Effort
You got this done in a short amount of time, A +
BONUS POINTS.
+5 Adding a link to my profile and contest in summary.
DEDUCTION POINTS.
-5 Turned in late.
Unfortunately I have to take off 5 points for it being late but it just cancels out the bonus points.
TOTAL = 44 +5 -5 = 44 POINTS
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