AWWWWWWWWWWH (: I'M SO GLAD YOUR WRITING ISN'T CLICHE AND HAD THEM LOSE THE BABY JUST FOR THE HECK OF IT. but that Logan guy, UGH. what a creep! ;c I'm so happy Mal and Gare are settled, though (: I CAN'T WAIT FOR HER TO HAVE THE BABY. IT'S GON' BE SO SWEET. please update soon! :D
i just read the last chapter, and i LOVED it! i seriously can't wait for more! i feel like the person who texted her could be one of two people, and the suspense is killing me! you both are amazing writers!
i see why garrett got mad at her... but it kind of is his fault at the same time and he shouldnt of yelled at her :/ i hope they work out and im glad that she realises that garrett is the man she belongs with... cant wait for more <3
She just... Has sex with John. Totally didn't see thy coming, even though Garrett said she could. But jeez! Keep writing! I wanna know what happens next!
woah, woah, woah Now I was not expecting her to have sex with John, despite what Garrett 'allowed' her to do. I can see why Garrett's getting angry, but at the same time, when you tell your pregnant girlfriend to get whatever it is 'out of her system,' you should be expecting the worst, which I guess this would be? But otherwise, I am glad she was able to realize how much she loves Garrett, at least it proved something. All the while, I love this story. Can't wait for more(:
Aah why did she have to do that?! Couldn't she just realize that she loved Garrett when he said that she should get it out of her system? I hope they make up! You're a good writer though, keep it up! I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
THAT WAS SO BEAUTIFUL AND SAD AND FUNNY. omfg Mal's reply to who's better. I am dying. but she did make a really stupid decision about having sex with John, even though a) he has Mr. All Night and b) he's a total sweetheart and c) he's just John Oh. PLEASE UPDATE SOON.
Uh, John why do you do these things? I am glad she actually got mad at him for once. I wonder if they're going to tell Garrett, or when he's going to find out. Anyway, I love this. update soon?