Oh my gosh. This is so good!! Saylor and Blake finally had sex!! I suppose next there will be the "Katie" talk and then the story would end a little after that but ahhh please please please consider publishing this
this definitely ranks among some the best sex scenes i've ever read but your writing is really great and i think you have a chance gosh i love blake and saylor!!! i love the frequent updates too
Holy shit. M'kay first of all, FUCKING FINALLY. Lol. Second, this story is top notch c: so I think you have a great chance ^___^ Third, boner. Lol. Well, theoretical boner x3
it's not terrible you say? It's freaking incredible!!! I have read some pretty awesome books and novels and stories and the like and this has got to be in my top five. you're just freaking awesome. I don't want it to end!!
*cough* Were did that come from? And yes we are excited by mermaids. :3 Or at least I am, Ariel was my first crush, and the reason I love red heads. xD
What a TERRIBLE cliffhanger!! something I (and probably most of your fans) have been looking forward to and it's not in the update wtf!!! GREAT chapter though, can't wait for the next one!! (seriously, I can't lol)