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  • marsflor

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    Can't wait for more! I'm glad your fixing things up. It shows you're serious about your writing. c:
    May 8th, 2013 at 10:21pm
  • SuperWhoVengeLock

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    It's looking good so far.
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    May 6th, 2013 at 02:09am
  • SuperWhoVengeLock

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    Awe. Mondays kinds suck. Good luck on your project.
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    February 5th, 2013 at 06:03am
  • SuperWhoVengeLock

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    I agree about the cheer captain idea. Cliché... I like going back to the beginning of everything though.
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    February 2nd, 2013 at 05:10am
  • teenagedream91

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    Even though they are small changes, I never really saw Lydia as a cheerleader for some reason. Yes we all know she is a freaking genius, but to be preppy too...I find that Lydia too dark to be that preppy girl. She does play the dimwit pretty well though or she tries too haha.
    Can't wait for the next chapter
    January 31st, 2013 at 05:17am
  • SuperWhoVengeLock

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    Excited for the revamp. :D
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    January 30th, 2013 at 12:22am
  • teenagedream91

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    Regardless of this being the same I am still excited how this story is going to turn out. I honestly love Mason and her personality. I can't wait to see the changes that you made :D
    January 28th, 2013 at 06:16am
  • girl meets girl

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    Lydia's dead? Wow, I didn't see
    that one coming :o This story
    was freakin' AMAZING. I loved it!
    And I'm really happy that Mason
    is a wolf now.... and the last chapter
    was brilliant! Stiles <33333 I'm
    stoked for the sequel :D
    September 7th, 2011 at 11:30pm
  • AlishaIeroVeex

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    very excited for the sequel!
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    September 7th, 2011 at 02:18am
  • dinoalien

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    THATS IT?!?! :( I can't wait for the sequel!!!! when are you gonna start it??
    September 6th, 2011 at 05:51am
  • bealiveplaydead

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    It took me a day to read this.
    it was great, seriously.
    I wasnt really a fan of the show, the overacting got to me, but I LOVE THIS STORY!
    Cant wait till the sequel ^.^
    September 5th, 2011 at 10:08pm
  • teenagedream91

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    It was a great ending, you left it opened instead of resolving of the problems that you created. It doesn't make sense when authors write a ending like that and they write a sequel that was meant to be suspensful it doesn't work out. Can't wait to read the sequel and have my eyes on the update of your Derek Hale story
    September 5th, 2011 at 07:53pm
  • Rawrr_ItsBrielle!

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    Can't wait to read the sequel :)
    September 5th, 2011 at 07:46pm
  • Taylor25

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    oh my god dsjkdfnkfhjek I'm speechless. I actually got teary eyed at part of the ending. This story is beyond amazing and I can't wait for the sequel! Great work! :)
    September 5th, 2011 at 08:35am
  • AlishaIeroVeex

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    FINALLY!
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    September 4th, 2011 at 06:15pm
  • dinoalien

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    I love it!!! Can't wait for an update! :)
    September 3rd, 2011 at 05:27am
  • girl meets girl

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    When Mase's father said he always knew that Scott
    and Mase would make a great couple, I laughed so
    hard xD this was still a group of kids who played
    musical chairs with their dates and ended up losing
    the one they wanted.
    I loved that (: “You look
    beautiful,” He responded, completely lovesick. It was
    almost making me sick…with jealously.
    LOL. Oh
    my. How I LOVE this story. Stiles and Mase are the
    the cutest couple!!! <333333 I'm so freakin' happy now
    that she is a werewolf ;D Also, I'm so excited for the
    last chapter since it's going to be in Stiles POV. And
    the sequel? Hell yes. (((((((:
    September 2nd, 2011 at 02:03am
  • teenagedream91

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    The only thing that I got from the chapter was Stiles and Mason kissed I was like holy crappers! They actually did it! Finally really! Mason being part of the pack, was actually waiting for that to happen haha and now it has. I love how this is all turning out and perfect opening to have a sequel after you are done with the last chapter and I wanna enter Stiles mind! I might get lost but who wouldn't want to get lost in the mind and be Stiled out? lol can't wait for the last chapter!!!! :DD
    September 1st, 2011 at 07:33am
  • two sided heart

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    yes she got bite i cant wait to see what else is in store lots of love so update soon .
    August 31st, 2011 at 05:59am
  • Rawrr_ItsBrielle!

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    OH SHIT i had a feeling this would happen O.O
    August 31st, 2011 at 03:57am