AHH! I just read this story beginning to end! I don't even watch Tenn Wolf and I think this is so amazing; I'm glad you chose Stiles for the main guy. Anywayyyyy....subscribing. PLEASE update!
Haha Scott and Mason are too funny. Shit is about to go down and I'm glad that Derek is on their side. Oh Mason I hope she is able to tell Stiles that she loves him! Alison eh she doesnt matter to me haha Can't wait for the next one and on to reading your new story :)
Okay, that little moment between Stiles and Mason was completely adorable. And I'm glad Derek pulled his head out of his ass to listen to her because this girl knows what she's talking about. Also, I'm ecstatic that Mason finally admitted to herself and out loud how she felt about Stiles. She's another step closer to admitting it to him. :)
Wow. Just...wow. This is really the first Teen Wolf fic I've seen anywhere so far. I am thoroughly enjoying reading this. What I really admire is the fact that you're sticking to the original episode plots, though you're adding in Mason's point-of-view and twisting it where it should be. I've never seen that done before, and I have to say, well done! :)
Onto my fan-girling: Dammit, Stiles, you are so goddamn blind! He deserves a good wonk over the head with a frying pan. And Lydia, that conniving little bitch. I just knew she couldn't suddenly have a change of heart about Mason. Jackson is, just like in the episode, letting his arrogance get the better of him.
So her father knew all this time and didn't do anything to arrest Kate that is like a slap in the face...worse than that actually. A lot of things were revealed in that chapter and typical for Stiles to come racing in after everything is done and over with haha. Scott is still the doofus he always was being around Allison, still makes me laugh. Great chapter
I like the idea of a plot twist! :D I think you should have Mason want to experiment with her seducing powers, and have a small fling with Derek then end up with Stiles (or maybe you can make the small fling an entire long lasting, happily ever after relationship that proves that they would be happy together). But I'm sure I'll love it either way!
I like the idea of Mason and Derek! It makes Stiles jealous and tensions to build...but the Jackson thing was good! Lydia just went up on the bitch scale though and Stiles made me mad. Dereak and mason are a great idea and I can't wait if you choose to go that way and stiles is still my favorite and him and mason should end up together!!! The plot twist is wonderful!
Love this story!! I think there should be a little Derek action but only enough for Stiles to find out and make him jealous and realize how much he likes Mason. Best of both worlds.