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  • dlee145247

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    Oh yeah thanks. Trust me, I began to rewrite it because it is so abrupt and jumps into things
    July 8th, 2011 at 08:25am
  • ximone

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    Great idea
    Rethink the characters
    Don't write so abrupt
    Put time between events
    And keep it up XD
    July 8th, 2011 at 05:12am
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