Hello,I'm here from Comment Swap. :) First off,I wanted to say that I'm not a huge fan of Twilight so I didn't know what to expect coming into it. I was pleasnetly surprised. :) With the exception of a few minor mistakes,I think this story has a lot of potential. I think that if you just went over it once more and re-read it,you'd easily find the few mistakes. That being said,I think you're a talented writer, and can't wait to read what else you put out. :)
First off,I wanted to say that I'm not a huge fan of Twilight so I didn't know what to expect coming into it. I was pleasnetly surprised. :) With the exception of a few minor mistakes,I think this story has a lot of potential. I think that if you just went over it once more and re-read it,you'd easily find the few mistakes. That being said,I think you're a talented writer, and can't wait to read what else you put out. :)