Tiptoe Through the True Bits - Comments

Wow. Just wow. This story was absolutely incredible. It felt so much longer than 22 chapters, and all the way through it I kept forgetting that Elise and Gerard hadn't been together very long. It's been a long time since I've really, really enjoyed a story on here, so thank you so much for this. It was amazingly written, and all the while I felt all the emotions Elise was feeling. I can't get over this story... I may have to read it again in the future. You are an amazing writer. I loved every single second of this story.

I can't believe you only have 8 other comments on this story. Anyways, let me just say that I am emotionally drained after reading this. I cried all the way through the last few chapters. This is just absolutely beautifully written and heartbreaking and just...ugh, I don't even know. But what I do know is that I loved this story so much and I am really glad I read it. You are definitely an amazing writer!

Holy shit.
This story is absolutely beautiful.
I dont ever want this to be over.
I cried alot and there was so much emotion in this I couldnt help it.
Honestly... I love you :)

I laughed, I cried, I grinned like a maniac. This story is beautiful <3

I hate you. I haven't cried in over a year and tears are in my eyes.

Wow, thank you so much. I'm really glad you liked it. It was really hard to write but I think it's probably one of my favourites now that it's done and it means a lot to me that somebody else enjoyed reading it as much as I enjoyed writing it :)

That was a beautifully written fan fiction. I am so disappointed in not finding it earlier but holy fucking shit this was amazing. Thank you so much for writing this and you have officially become my favorite writer. I'm am truly amazed.

Aw, the thought of having a baby at such a young age isn't accepted. But I'm sure once you really think about it, having a baby with someone you truly love, it wouldn't be so bad.

If you don't update, I just might kill you.
Too harsh? Yeah, I thought so.
But really, update.

I'm shocked that there aren't any comments on this story yet!
I just read the first chapter and I loved it!
I've been to a counselor before and so I could totally relate to the awkwardness and embarrassment she was feeling.
You described everything flawlessly!
I have nothing bad to say about this story, it's fantastic!
Keep up the good work (: