Til' The End - Comments

Hi, here from comment swap. This definitely is not the type of story that I typically go for. Usually for me high school romance stories are a bit cliche. I think the story moved a bit quicker than I had expected. Since they had been friends for so long, why is it just now that they begin to move so quickly? Other than that, I wish there was more description between the dialogue.
Besides that, I think you have good grammar and your character interactions can be realistic. The layout is nice too. It makes the story easy to read while also showing what the story is about.

Comment swapperino sent me here. The summary didn't seem very exciting so at first I was a bit apprehensive. Although I'm not a big fan of high school stories, this one deals with an issue that shouldn't even be an issue and it's very real. The way you write makes it even more realistic and it's very touching. Keep up the good work! :)

I'm here from comment swap. I couldnt really get into this story. I dont know what it is bout it but I just wasnt interested. Your grammar is good and your layout really represents what the story is about.

Ok, so when I began the story I instantly had misgivings about it. I've seen a lot literature dealing with homosexuality on this site, and most of it is cheesy or just plain awful. But right off the bat I realized that you wrote something different. Instead of writing some girl's fairytale about to gay men, you wrote a real piece about the struggles of high school. In it I see such universal problems as trying to fit in, struggling with sexuality, and friendship. The fact that you so profoundly address these issues, and not just write a fantastic romance, clearly sets you apart from others who write similar pieces. In short, well done :)

Oh. My.
I thoroughly enjoy this story.

I like how Mason and Logan both obviously have feelings for each other but refuse to even think about the fact that the other might actually like them back.

And I have a feeling that I'm going to absolutely despise Carter. So prepare for my bitchfits in the future. xD

I'm a new reader. :D Hiiiiiii.

Anywho.
I really like Mason already. There's just something about him.

Pete is such a whore. -_-
Thanks for the warning at the beginning of the chapter. Greatly appreciated! hahaha
They are such horndogs and I love it!
Can't wait for moreeee :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D : D

.....So that was interesting.. hahahha! I was just sitting there reading, all innocent and such. Then BAM! Sex! hahaha I enjoyed it. Not bad for your first boy on boy sex scene! Good work, Stallion Duck.

I really don't like that Taylor guy.. I just have a feeling about him. AND ITS NOT A GOOD ONE.
The end was sooooooo mushy.
AND I LOVED IT. <3

I don't know about this Taylor fool.
Mason getting flustered at the beginning was kind of fishy..
Geeeeze! Talk about an orgy at Petes' house. Licking abs and whatnot. haha.
That's wrong that Taylor is your favorite besides Mason. Logan should be up there too!.
Goood job, Budddddddy! :D

It may have been a filler, but it was adorable.
haha Mason is the chick in the relationship. That made me laugh. haha.
They are too horndogs! They're attacking each other every chance they have.
Great update, buddy. :D

Daaaawwwwwe! Love it! :D

Haha good, you skipped it last time
but i love both of them, they are my favorite characters to write about. :D

Ohhhh daaannng.! Hahah
I read the entire chapter, I did not skip to the steamy parts I promise. hahaha
Mason is soo adorable. He's a horndog though. haha Logan is cute too. :)
Loved ittt!!!. I hope they didn't scar mason's mom.!

He's a stud :)

Mason is cute lol.
x

Haha well of course Mason is cute. I thought of him ;) haha just kidding
but i want Mason to be the more. . . femi of the two

Adorable chapter. :)
Ohhhhhh, it got a little steamy too ;)
Daayumn I wish I was Logan, but in girl form. haha
Mason is so cute. haaha.

I think Carter should look like Johnny that way Johnny can be a bad ass for once.
and yeaa gay rights buddy.
Sexual orientation doesnt define a person. . . I would know haha.
thanks buddy.

Carter is an asshole.! I hate him. Welllll, unless he is hot. Then. Maybe it'd be slightly better. hahah Just kidding. Gay Rights all the way here.! hahah.
Loved it. Suspenseful. Intense. Just what I like. :)