Misconception Of a Sigh - Comments

Wow, this is fantastic. Fantastic doesn't even really describe it, in all honesty. This really took my breath away. I read this, thought about it, and realized it was about breathing and the personification of that. At least that's what I initially got out of it. I read the title again, skimmed back over the piece, and it was just really amazing. I can only assume that this was the personification of a breath or a sigh reaching out to the reader. I could be terribly wrong, though. Regardless, I absolutely adored this piece. The diction was breath-taking and really made me feel as if I were, like lighthouse. said, reading a classic piece in my English class. You truly are a gifted writer.

Okay, I read this drabble twice. I admit the first time, I was a little perplexed and then I re-read it and I finally get it, I also like the title, it's amazing and it really links with the story!

You have an amazing way with words, you phrase things very well and they flow well, giving it a very elegant and a classical sort of feel. This was a powerful piece of writing and really did cause the reader to think about other meanings behind a sigh.

Well done <3

I loved this piece, I found it had a very classical edge to it and I found myself reading it as a one of the classics in my English class.
I loved the direct speech to the reader, and the first tense.
I thought the way you phrased things was good, and I liked your choice of words.
Great job!

I found this utterly brilliant! I thought the concept was amazing and it was done very well.
I agree with lions; My favourite line was “I'm more than familiar with your teeth and your lies, down your throat and behind your lungs.” Brilliant!
Very well done, indeed! =]

Firstly, the title is amazing and it seriously drew me in and made me read this. I just cannot get over your magnificent way with words; you could easily be mistaken for a professional writer. Each and every line just rings and has so much thought put into it; I sit here thinking, “I could never come up with something as beautiful as that!” My favorite line had to be this: “I'm more than familiar with your teeth and your lies, down your throat and behind your lungs.” It was just so poetic and dark. Another thing I liked particularly about this story is that it is in first person and the narrator talks to the audience, which made chills run down my spine.

You definitely have some powerful writing and I could never even try to criticize this when there is no way I could match my writing to this wonderfulness <3

* It. Sorry, not I.

This was a little confusing.
It's deep and it makes you think.
I was well written to, so good job.