I'm glad that he decided to grow up and I really hope that he stays sweet to holly and Olivia, but i smell trouble like a Riley incident. But I'm not sure if it's just me but when you switch from Jeff or Holly or someone elses p.o.v. with out dividing it up or separating the sections more it gets confusing. but i really love this. -S
Girl, I was beginning to think you weren't going to update this story anymore! I'm so glad Holly and the baby are going to be OK. Jeff definitely realized how much she means to him and how much he wanted this baby.