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  • shes_crazy

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    dayuuum!!! badass!!
    June 10th, 2013 at 08:40am
  • Norman Reedus

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    Just found this and wow. I loved it, it's so different and that third chapter wow. My mind's blown away!
    March 11th, 2013 at 12:26pm
  • OctoberA7X

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    Wow kicked him out!!! Straight gangsta lol

    Love this it's so unique, great job :)
    September 9th, 2012 at 10:12pm
  • Dasha.

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    This was extremely unique and I did expect to see you go in this kind of direction with the item being a car. It wasn't your typical story and it was unique that you broke it up into three chapters. I was perfectly spaced out and your writing style is absolutely wonderful. You put so many details into the story and at the same time left out a lot. I almost found it shocking that with him cheating on her she still ended up giving her virginity to him. But she didn't take him back permanently, she still got rid of him for being a cheater though she gave him her most sacred thing. This as written very lovely. Thanks for entering mine and Kayla's contest and good luck!
    August 19th, 2011 at 07:25am
  • bloodravyn

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    damn, that was hot!
    *subscribes*
    August 4th, 2011 at 11:26am
  • saint james.

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    I loved the update. Pretty fucked up what Matt did. Please update very soon!
    June 19th, 2011 at 06:42am
  • HailMisery

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    He took he virginity and decided to leave.... what an assbutt.

    I beg of you please don't leave me hanging... I have to find out what happens next.

    This chapter was amazing.... love it :D
    June 17th, 2011 at 03:31am
  • palazzbm

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    i hope this isn't over.
    June 16th, 2011 at 02:40am
  • Lady9511

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    Is it over with now?
    June 16th, 2011 at 01:35am
  • baby girl;

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    Whoa! Whoa! Whoa!
    Is that the end?
    Now, I'm mad at you.
    Just kidding! I ♥ this story!
    There should be a sequel!
    June 16th, 2011 at 12:56am
  • heartracin

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    This is soooo goood! I hope there is more!
    June 16th, 2011 at 12:46am
  • Zarina Rhei

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    O_O Damn.
    *speechless*
    June 15th, 2011 at 01:58pm
  • sonyv

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    Love it!!!!! More soon please
    June 14th, 2011 at 04:47am
  • HailMisery

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    This is so fucking great :)

    Can't wait to read more.
    June 14th, 2011 at 02:54am
  • kmfdm

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    So great, yes yes, very very great.
    June 14th, 2011 at 02:35am
  • foREVer Synyster

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    loveee this so much
    June 13th, 2011 at 09:33am
  • foREVer Synyster

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    loveee this so much
    June 13th, 2011 at 09:33am
  • shadows vengeance

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    i love it, its really good cant wait to read the next update
    June 13th, 2011 at 06:46am
  • natorrie16

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    i love it! its really good :D
    June 13th, 2011 at 06:41am
  • XxWishxOnxAxStarxX

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    Amazing I cant wait to see what happens next.
    June 13th, 2011 at 05:17am
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