You've Got That Something - Comments

I think I love you.

Your grammar. It's perfect. It makes me so happy, I want to cry. :')

This was too cute. And the layout just added to the overall cuteness of the story. It was so lighthearted and hard not to love. My life is uneventful too, so I could totally relate to Samantha. I sometimes get jealous when I see people laughing and having fun. Like, why are you happier than me!? >:| I wish a cute boy would plow me over one of these days! I'd take some minor bruising if it meant getting a date with some cute little charmer with a football. ;D

This is adorable - everything about it, including the layout. :D
Your writing style is so clear and easily readable, and the actual plot is so cute. I sort of wish there were more chapters just because Joseph and Samantha could really blossom together, but as it is, it's still a great story. Awesome job. :)

People/Quote Photo Contest:

Layout: Layout was very cute and perfect, I liked it.

Content: The story was cute, and I like how you broke it into two chapters. I like how Joseph literally took Samantha's breath away; it was cute and cheesy. I think you could've made it a little more practical; just because Joseph ran into her doesn't mean he needs to make it up to her by taking her on a date...I don't know, it just didn't seem real.

Overall, great job :D

I adore your use of description. It's not too much, but enough that I get a clear picture of your characters.
They're very real and relatable. I could see myself being friends with these girls.
Awesome job =D

A delicious story, and a lovely set of characters! As said before, your layout is freaking cute. I really love how seemingly sweet and innocent Samantha is,and am excited to see more from you (:

The layout is nice and simple; the wood border on the side really adds a nice simple touch while giving it a summery feel.

Lovely soul. I love that, it’s a beautiful way to describe her. When you say she lives on her own it makes me wonder how old she is? Maybe her early twenties?

Chapter One:

I like the way that you started with her cleaning, it was different and it really gave us a glimpse of who she was.

Is Samantha a book nerd or does she like being alone in her house all the time?

I like the change from an apron, pj’s and cleaning gloves to a nice floral dress and a pretty hairdo.

It’s a really good start to what I hope is a really good story! Good job!

I liked the way you set up your comment for my story so I'll do it the same way lol.
Summary
Your layout and picture is simply precious <3 It's simple and adorable, I like it a lot. I also liked that you kept your summary simple but still managed to give a good description of the main character in only a few words. The last sentence really makes me curious as to what happens. Your summary draws the reader in which is very important! :)
Chapter 1
This chapter was cute and very well written. I didn't notice any errors and I am known to be quite nitpicky about errors lol. The first paragraph made me laugh because I can relate to her habits about cleanliness. I'm terrified of germs and getting sick so I constantly wash my hands every chance I get lol. I don't like to touch trashbags or doorknobs or even tissues because I associate them with dirty things. (End rant lol)
This chapter flowed well and the word cardigan is so cute to me for some reason :P This was a very good story, I'm interested about seeing what you do with this! Great job :)