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Courtney Love
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Yesss. Finally, a good Kurt Cobain story that isnt about stupid shit. I love it.
June 26th, 2011 at 07:44am
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I love this so far.
Subscribed :)
June 14th, 2011 at 12:40am
gyu the pooh
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YOU GO, ALLY! :)
The kiss I felt was a little too early, but the detailed argument compensated for that.
Kurt standing in the glow of diner lights = STRONG imagery; I could visualize that.
Good work, substantial!
June 13th, 2011 at 08:32pm
gyu the pooh
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Okay, two things:
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"I rolled over in bed, wishing I didn't have to leave the comfort of my pillows."
-- know the feeling and the chapter all the more homely. :)
2. the man proposing to the woman on the bridge --
priceless;
love the effect that it brought.
Can't wait to see more of Ally and Kurt! ;)
June 13th, 2011 at 07:38pm
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I am now subscribed :)
I like this start.
June 13th, 2011 at 04:50am
gyu the pooh
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This is seriously genuine. So fresh-faced, so
REAL
! It's a breather from some of the other stuff I've seen on here lately. :D
I'm subbing.
June 13th, 2011 at 04:33am
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