Rise Above This - Comments

Owwwwwwn <3

SO. FUCKING. CUTE!
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This was one of the best one-shots you've done so far, Kari. I really loved seeing the emotion and the connection to the song. I like the fact that you strayed away from a suicide aspect of the song, and that you took it your own route and went with it. It shows that it's a very creative story, and that you didn't just do the easy thing. It's also grammatically sound, as well. I didn't catch very many mistakes at all, and I think that the plot behind it is absolutely cute. I liked the interaction between Matt and Jena, as well. It shows that they can be best friends as well as perfect for each other romantically. ^_^

This was probably one of the cutest one shots ever. I love how playful they were with one another, and how they had been friends and such. I really like how you took a song about suicide and turned it into something else.

Aw, they're perfect for each other. <3

aww this is so lovely i love a7x :) very sweet

OH MY GOD

SO CUTE!! I love this!