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  • ThingsNeverChange

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    I don't usually read short stories, but this one caught my eye. I loved it :) Definately quite original.
    June 24th, 2011 at 05:59am
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    @DontFallDownStairs

    Glad I could convert you! But yes, it was sort of supposed to be like that. Thank you so much though!

    hehe, Thanks. (:
    June 20th, 2011 at 01:18am
  • DontFallDownStairs

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    This was really sweet. I kind of have a guilty pleasure for Oliver, though normally its Oliver/Charlie but you really pulled this one off. Just a little concrit: the ending felt a bit unexpected and a little forced. Maybe that's what you were going for but just thought I'd point it out from a reader's point of view. =)

    P.S. I love your username ;)
    June 19th, 2011 at 10:49pm
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