Jasey Rae - Comments

I LOVE THIS! :D
okay, now everything i have to say. I really love the relationship between jack and jasey, it's so cute and i was like awwwhhh the whole time. I also loved the "go forward, then turn right, then turn right, then turn right, then turn right, and you'll have gone in a square." or however that went. I died laughing.
anyways, i wanna know what happens to that creep kyle, and please do something with that annoying bitch chloe, ugh i don't like her lol.
one thing i really don't like is how one scene will get played out in different povs, it's kinda repetitive. I understand if you're repeating maybe the end of a scene then continuing, but not the WHOLE thing over.
well, that's it, and i'm excited to see where this goes. Great job!
NOW UPDATE! :)

Awww that's sweet :)

Awww that's sweet :)

Poor jasey :(

Lovely :)

He'll get payback, don't worry c:

Kyle deserves way worse..

I don't like him either :p C:

I love this! But I hate Kyle. douche.

Alex kinda owes it to her, ya think? C:
Hopefully updating in the next couple of days

Poor Jasey! My brother would KILL his friends if any of them liked me even a little bit like that!!!! Update soon! :)

Thanks for being so awesome!

Updates coming soon, guys! :D

Oh my god Jasey....

Ehhh? Whaaattt?? That is by far one of the worst hangovers I've ever read! But at the same time, I completely understand ending the chapter there. I agree that Kyle is an asshole, though Alex is an even bigger one for not believing his little sister.

Ahhhh, I want moreeee!!!!! Please update ? <3

Wow Kyle is an asshole what the fuck is up with him?! i would freak out if my dream came true like that! like every single word...freaky!!!! update soon! :)

ahhhhhhhhh..... Kyle's an ass! I knew something was wrong with him.

Minus chloe being bitchy and Alex being a DICKHEAD

I love it :)