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  • imbalance

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    That was simple but beautiful.
    The blood on the lips thing was somehow amazing and powerful.
    This really was amazing.
    I know this isn't that good a comment but I can't think of anything else to say.
    April 10th, 2011 at 05:31am
  • sketch.

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    Just read this.

    Whoa. It was so... dark, but at the same time it was so believable and beautiful. I loved the way it was so vague and disconnected from anything else, yet painted (painted xD ) such a vivid image in my mind.

    -shrug- this isn't a very good comment, but well done. Well done x329844987.
    May 27th, 2008 at 12:13am
  • Miss May; ballroom

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    That was...wow. I really liked when how you had them put the blood on their lips, like lipstick. It struck me hard. I have this five-year-old cousin, and she does stuff like that. Paint, candy, anything, she rubs it on her mouth like lipstick. The character rubbing the blood on their lips really just took my mind to these two images, one of my cousin rubbing candy on her mouth, and one of a girl rubbing blood on her mouth, and how truly similar they are. That was really vivid and an insane connection, even if it wasn't on purpose. Props to you for being awesome like that.
    February 20th, 2008 at 12:18am
  • ultraviolet;

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    I completely agree with the above.
    There's also something about it that means it wouldn't work if it was longer or more complicated.
    February 15th, 2008 at 06:35pm
  • oxford comma.

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    So simple, yet there is an underlying mood/tone/something that makes this more than just well organized words.
    My favorite lines:

    It swirled around my wrist like a bracelet.

    crying from my fingertips

    The blood is still on my lips.
    February 15th, 2008 at 03:12pm
  • folie a dru.

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    xoxox
    -Dru
    February 15th, 2008 at 08:05am
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