October 7th, 2017 at 11:45pm
aww, i completely LOVED this...
stella's a bitch
can't wait for more(:
Saving Me - Comments
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July 10th, 2011 at 07:54pm
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yay thanks for updating, i loved this chapter(:
i missed reading this story lol...please update soon?July 9th, 2011 at 08:34pm -
stellas a bitch!
love it!<3July 9th, 2011 at 07:35am -
add more please. i like this story!July 9th, 2011 at 06:50am
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i love it!
please update!July 9th, 2011 at 03:47am -
That was goodJuly 3rd, 2011 at 02:54pm
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LOVED it(:
hehe those machines are fun...my dad got one for no reason at all once so he let me play with it...very very fun, except i got like really dizzy after using it ahahha(:
update soon?June 29th, 2011 at 04:26pm -
this story is AMAZING!!!! (:
i cant believe no one has commented, just woww:P
anyways, i hope jack wakes up soon, i feel bad for him because jack is like awesome;)
please update soon?!?! i NEED to read more hehe(:
subscribed;)June 28th, 2011 at 04:26am
So, I just stumbled across this, and from reading the summary to getting through everything that you have of it...
Let's just say, I didn't know what to expect, but I definitely didn't expect this. This story definitely deserves a lot more attention than it got; idk why it doesn't have more comments.
I've seen this type of plot line before, you know, the whole car accident thing... but usually, it's always so rushed. Everyone ends up being okay after a chapter or two, or it tragically ends, but this... I really enjoy how it's drawn out, and it took the time to have them heal; there wasn't a resolution right away. Hell, where you left off, Jack still wasn't awake.
The only critique I have with things being slightly illogical was with the last update, where Katherine was able to drive to Alex's with two hurt arms, that didn't really make much sense how she was able to do that. Not to mention, also while she was trying to manage a panic attack, so not only were her arms ailments, but that too. It makes me wonder how she managed to get there safe. Don't get me wrong, I'm glad she did, but it almost seems like that was one in a million that she did. Also, the fact that she went to the club in the first place, still being as fragile as she was. I get that she wasn't with the best influence (Rena), but still... I think she should have enough logic to put her social life on hold, at least until her arms heal.
But anyway, those factors aside, the rest of this story was very real and calculated. I liked how when Naomi went home, you still discussed her recovery, with breathing exercises, the pain, etc. Like that was an extremely realistic factor I loved because I have never seen a writer go into that much detail with the recovery process before, so kudos. You're one of the first I've seen to do that.
Anyway, wow... I'm leaving this long comment, and it's been years since you've updated this, so it may be a bit pointless leaving feedback, but I just wanted to let you know that I checked out your story and enjoyed it. I hope you maybe consider continuing this someday, because I would love to see how it all plays out. Plus, I can only imagine your writing has gotten better, which would make it even more enjoyable to see; this is impressive enough, but if you've gotten better? :O Can only imagine how amazing this would turn out.
But yeah, it's been a while, so I'm not even sure you get on here anymore, but, I just wanted to leave feedback. I'm very much impressed with this. I really hope you still get on here and see my comment to show you people like me are still reading. :) If you ever do choose to continue, I'll be here to read, for sure.
At the very least, I wanted to leave this comment to let you know I think you're an amazing writer, even if this is never continued. I hope you're at least writing on your own time. This is the first story I've gotten into that goes through multiple POVs, as well. It's usually not my thing, but this one sucked me in, so kudos for finally being a writer to get me hooked on a multiple POV story. :)