this is absolutely fantastic. One of the most moving stories i've read in a long time. congratulations :) you're an amazing writer. i love the way you run words together, like schoolbuilding ect. it gives the story a kindof disjointed feeling, which is a perfect insight into Jane's brain. ha, that rhymes. :file: so yeah. i love it xxxxxxxxx
Älskar den. Mycket bättre än min fanfic xD gosh, den ska jag ta bort. Men fortsätt skriv :) Och du får gärna låna mig den BB-skivan nästa gång vi ses, den verkar ju bra! Puss
wow! I've just read the first two chapters, and it's fucking awesome! You are a very good writer and your english is also very good! I loved this part in chapter one "I just wanted to cut the shit off. And with shit I didn't think about my hair. I meant my whole head...." I've never given much thought to the song The diary of jane (but I DO like it).. Did you just get inspiration from it, or do you think that the song could be about something like this? well, I'm gonna read the rest now :)
Ps. jag glömde att jag kunde skriva på svenska :P Ds.
Ha, A part of me can relate to the 'why is everyone so happy?' thing. I always thought that when i was depressed, and I was aware of the world's terrors. Again, wonderful chapter. *goes to read next one*
First chapter hands down, descriptive and wonderful. It really set a mood for the beginning of the story. Unlike othes i've read i really got a feeling from how things were for these people. Magnificant. Going to read the next chapter now :]