This is really good. You should probably write a real story. This is one of the few good teen wolf stories. :P I'm currently writing a Stiles fic as well. :)
LOVED your one shot i thought it was absolutely adorkable :P just like stiles but i thoroughly enjoyed reading it there isn't a lot of good fics written about teen wolf, i think its cause it isn't that big yet. i'm glad i found yours :)
Aww i thought this was really cute! I think you should write a stiles story? There's not enough about Stiles and a girl, most of the ones I have seen are Stiles and Derek. There's not many teen wolf stories in general. Great job though! I loved it! :D