Dear author, I liked this. It was simple and sweet. Everyone took their relationship well and I liked how they weren't the basic gay couple, feminine and all. They were just two guys who happened to fall in love. Brownie points for that. You had a few writing typos here and there, words missing and sometimes you went from past to present (verbal tense problem) Edit this and it will be a sweet piece. I do a bunch of writing mistakes myself, so no worries, everyone does them. All in all, I enjoyed reading this cute one-shot. ~Marian.
February 13th, 2013 at 01:26pm
