I really love the idea, but it felt kinda rushed which could be a good thing. And the school shooting seemed really random otherwise i love it. I hardly ever see orignal fan fic. its all usually the same. (:
I haven't started readint this story yet, I just figured I'd tell you this You have this story under the wrong type You have it under Original fiction But this is no way an Original fiction, this is a Fan fiction So you better change that, just a warning =)