heyy thanks for the comment!!! Ill make the changes and continue as soon as possible!!
June 21st, 2011 at 08:57pm
Wow, that was pretty interesting. Just the title caught my attention because it flows and it is easy to remember.
The only issue is that I don't know what NVA's are so you should probably verify what they are before you use the abbreviation. You also press enter a lot in mid-sentences so it was a little chopped up.
Once i read the story it was good, you should continue.