This Is How I Disappear - Comments

  • CannibalsDemise

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    I think this last chapter was really great. I mean, the only person who can fail spagetti is Frankie of course! I feel bad for Tess because she is most likely gonna get her heart broken some time. I like it that Frank has decided to open up a little more but I feel bad that Tess is scaring him by pushing him right when he is. But I also really like it. It adds drama to the story and an obstacle for Frankie to overcome. Keep writing this story because I think it is on a good track! :) you are an amazing writter.
    August 16th, 2011 at 07:17pm
  • DoubleRepeat29

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    OMG!!! i didnt see that one coming!! Tess? pushing him! wow! cant wait to see what happens next!
    August 13th, 2011 at 08:01pm
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    @Mythical_freak: Thank you, I'm glad you like it! I just get nervous from time to time, something I guess all writers get. Yeah, I just wanted them to 'meet' again, and making him realise he can manage just fine without her. She might appear again though, haven't really decided yet. Again; thanks!
    August 13th, 2011 at 07:33pm
  • Mythical_freak

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    Hun you have nothing to worry about the last chapter was perfect... It fits in so well and I could predict something like that happening (I'm proud :3) but wow that Helena ghostly moment scared the hell outta me..I thought frank would fall apart... Great story keep going :)
    August 13th, 2011 at 05:18pm
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    @DoubleRepeat29: I'm glad you liked it, haha! :D And yup, seems like there's some sparkles between Tess and Frank ;) Stay tuned to see how their 'relationship' develops! :D
    August 5th, 2011 at 01:01pm
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    "so I walk down the pasta aisle, guessing spaghetti would be there somewhere. And who knew, I was right! God, I feel like Einstein right now!" ahahahahaahah i just laughed soooooooo hard! ahahaha :D that was great! lol that just made my day :D anyway, Tess and Frank??? oh geez wonder how this gonna work out! lol
    August 5th, 2011 at 03:12am
  • CannibalsDemise

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    Hell yeah Frankie! Just walk away. I love that. He is so stupid though. But good will come of this hopefully
    August 5th, 2011 at 01:01am
  • Live_Violence

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    AMAZIMG!
    im so glad you did the sequal :)
    July 28th, 2011 at 01:36pm
  • CannibalsDemise

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    My cousin had a bomb scare a while back and I really hope that everything turns out okay for you and your family. I am glad Frankie is trying to open up and teach Jane his song. She seems like me, except for the Hannah Montana part... Again I hope y'all stay safe there.
    July 24th, 2011 at 01:55am
  • DoubleRepeat29

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    i really really liked your mention about Hayle Williams and Paramore! I love Paramore!!! :D and im so sorry to hear about the attack on Norway :( i really hope that you and your family are safe! My thoughts and prayers are with the people of Norway and all the innocent victims, may they rest in peace.
    July 22nd, 2011 at 09:36pm
  • TokyoBennyBlack

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    Awww xDD
    July 20th, 2011 at 09:27pm
  • CannibalsDemise

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    I missed your story! Ya it's back. And I hope you had a fantastic vacation. Sounds fun going to Turkey. I feel bad for Aria. But not too bad.
    July 16th, 2011 at 03:11am
  • DoubleRepeat29

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    woo your back! :D
    July 12th, 2011 at 07:01am
  • TokyoBennyBlack

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    Absolutely amazing xD
    July 3rd, 2011 at 08:41pm
  • DoubleRepeat29

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    Awesome! i like the reference to him disappearing it was really sad but it fit and also Have fun in Turkey! :D
    June 23rd, 2011 at 07:39pm
  • CannibalsDemise

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    Wow. This is a great sequel. I love it. Keep writin'!!!
    June 20th, 2011 at 06:12am
  • Draven;

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    I know I don't comment a lot, but I really like this. It's not like other stories where life completely stops for peoples' who loved ones have died. This story shows that you can get over someone, no matter how painful it it. I love it.
    June 20th, 2011 at 02:49am
  • McR..-L

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    i loveee thissss !! and i can imagine how "this is how i disappear" is gonna end up...i lovee it!!!!
    June 17th, 2011 at 10:44pm
  • SinfulGrly

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    im loven' it !! its so emotional right now :)
    June 17th, 2011 at 03:56am
  • Draven;

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    love this :D
    June 17th, 2011 at 01:34am