I think this last chapter was really great. I mean, the only person who can fail spagetti is Frankie of course! I feel bad for Tess because she is most likely gonna get her heart broken some time. I like it that Frank has decided to open up a little more but I feel bad that Tess is scaring him by pushing him right when he is. But I also really like it. It adds drama to the story and an obstacle for Frankie to overcome. Keep writing this story because I think it is on a good track! :) you are an amazing writter.
August 16th, 2011 at 07:17pm