Should've Known Better - Comments

This was really good. Love the pic you used for it. From Another Cinderella Story. I just loved it.

Lemme say, this story was absolutely captivating. At first, before even reading the description, I wasnt sure what to expect because the banner doesn't really fit the story. I opened the one shot and got hooked from the first sentence. Your diction is amazing, and I could really see the story play out. I like how you told your feelings how you felt them, like Taylor being a jerk for getting a girlfriend over the summer. The ending was perfect: I loved how you ended it with sort-of a cliffhanger. Great great job! =D

:D I'll be the first to comment on this. I am debating entering the contest you did and after reading your entry, I think I will. I had a very similar situation with a boy as you where we always seemed so close, so connected, yet we never took another step to start the relationship. My heart goes out to you for sharing a sad and longing story many girls experience and sadly I have experienced countless times since I've moved every year of my life. :D I liked this. I thought you passed the time progression well and it was a sweet and intruiging story that I read to the end. Good job! :D