i'm so in love with the prequel and i'm loving this. i just wanna cheer ian up. i hate for him to be so sad, it makes me cry, but anyways i think you're a good writer.
You have no idea how excited I was when I saw this sequel. I was in love with Detention and your characters, and I can't wait to see where this one goes :)
This comment is not for fear of the buses, not even a little bit x) I love the opening to this, it catches us right up to where they are now without feeling all STOP THE PLOT FOR INFORMATION, it's well-integrated and I'm looking forward to it. Comment virginity is mine >:) (does that mean I got the story pregnant? ._.)