Equilibrium - Comments

Comment swapper here. The only thing I'd have to say is that there is no real indication of what this story is about. There needs to be some sort of summary. I was a little disappointed by that, considering it makes me not want to read your story.

The layout is really nice, and it goes well with the story as I can see.

I didn't see any grammar or spelling mistake, :)

Anyways, keep up the good work!

Comment Swap user!! I'm going to have to agree with everyone when they said they don't really know what's going on. The summary didn't tell me what exactly was going on. But on the plus side, your story is really good. I love your layout!!! It's so adorable :) I don't usually read BTR member stories but I'm glad I found this one. Like I said, your story is very well written and very good!

Comment Swap! Yeah as the chick or dude before said, I'm really not sure if the guy is her boyfriend or a friend or anything? You are very detailed and i did get the flashes of the scene in my head when i read it. You truthfully just gotta explain the begging of the story a little bit more and then your story should all come together! All in all the story is really good keep up the good work!

Like someone said, I don’t understand what is going on. I really like this though. You have detail. It flows rather nicely. I really like the detail you put into this. I also like how you stopped and showed how he was feeling. Most writers would have kept the heat going. Good job.

Got another one of your stories in the comment swap! Which I'm glad, because at least I know I'm reading something good. Since it's the same fandom as the one I read last night, I'm still not familiar and again it didn't matter. This was so adorable and sweet and wonderful. Logan is such a sweetie pie and Kandi is a lucky girl. Can we have more guys like him out there? Everything just flowed so well and again, I just love your descriptions and narration. I really have nothing bad to say and I really enjoyed reading this.