June 27th, 2011 at 04:22am
Ooo, a very grand beginning, might I say.
So, that is his only sin? I highly doubt that, but we shall see...
The description, as I knew it would be, is amazing! Really, I know I've told you before, but you are talented.
Only two mistakes I caught were:
"Everyone in the room stood watching the princess and princess as they stood."
^ I think you meant prince and princess
""Shall we my lady?""
^ There should be a comma after we.
UPDATE SOON, LOVE! <3
Its sad how she can't tell her mother shes a dancer :(
Also, I'm curious as to what might happen with that maid ;D I can't wait to read more.