I love this. cant wait for more
June 28th, 2011 at 02:51am
Sorry it took me so long to get this review to you!!! I am so honoured that you wanted to base a one shot off of some of the things that happened in Tangled and that you had so much fun with the characters. I thought that you captured Sammie's feisty personality perfectly. And her loyalty to her name is terrifying! lol Glad she at least tried to hand that guy his ass. And when that other douche said that about Mason...
Love that Maykayla had an actual personality. Her devotion to daddy, crush on Manny and her horror when it comes to Chara. So wonderful.
Reading about the loss just brought the pain back :(
I thought that Ryan's agony...both physically and mental...was spot on. And I'm glad that he has someone that loves him and isn't going to give up on him. As much as he feels as if he's beyond salvation, he really does need some help and he needs to get a grip on things. And make amends with the people he hurt.
Loved it!
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