This sounds like a very good idea. I love mystery/thriller stories. (Well, I like alot of stories XD) I really see the potential in this =) The one thing I would suggest is to try and make the chapters a little bit longer/detailed in the future and maybe no use a font that's so large. I'm curious to see where this one goes though. Keep it up =3
I really see the potential in this =)
The one thing I would suggest is to try and make the chapters a little bit longer/detailed in the future and maybe no use a font that's so large.
I'm curious to see where this one goes though.
Keep it up =3