Intensity - Comments

First off, I'd like to thank you for entering this in my contest. :) I really like the layout; I think that you did a great job with it. This comment is really going to suck but I really thought that this was absolutely adorable. The idea was so unique; I've never read anything like this before. It was definitely a very unique way to incorporate the picture into your story. Cute, fluffy and great; I enjoyed this. :D

Oh, I forgot to comment on the layout; it's beautifuuul! The only thing I don't like is the font, but that's just personal, so don't worry about that.

This is bloody brilliant! I love that you can get so many out of this picture. Any other person would've made it about skateboarding or the warmth of his bare skin underneath his shirt. But you made it like this, so original. It's really, really cool.
I also love that it's slash, (it is, right? The 'I' person was the guy in the picture, right?) And I really love that last line. All of it calls up so many questions. Do they even know each other? Where have they met? Who are they?
Very well done. :D