I Said Love Bite's NOT Bite Me - Comments

  • Key2MyHeart

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    Its good so far... Just alot of run on sentences and different things are missing but overall is good! :)
    November 6th, 2011 at 03:57am
  • KellShadows

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    Love the story so far, I hope you up-date again soon! =)
    October 15th, 2011 at 06:39am
  • Trig-ger

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    its amazing so far
    October 10th, 2011 at 02:34am
  • Vampiresloveme

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    Great work so far but you've got to put periods and comma's where they belong!!! Please keep up the great work! I can't wait for the next chapter!
    August 20th, 2011 at 07:42am
  • Eat-My-Toes-Barbie

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    I really like it! :) But I noticed there's no comma's in your writing which makes it difficult for me to read properly so if you could put comma's in it would be GREAT! :) xx
    August 1st, 2011 at 08:37am
  • nainay4

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    I like this very much...please do post more chapters up =)
    July 30th, 2011 at 04:45am
  • Vampire vengeance

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    Pleas post more chapters cause I am a big vampire diaries fan and so far the story is very good.
    June 17th, 2011 at 11:29am