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  • skeleton;

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    ABI-BABY UPDATE THIS OMG PLEASE.
    January 6th, 2013 at 06:41am
  • life in film.

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    This story is really sexy. I love it. I wish I could write something more useful but I'm pretty tired so I'm just going to say one thing; Please update soon.
    July 30th, 2011 at 04:45pm
  • fooleish

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    I really like this. I love Darcy, she seems like such a great character and a really amazing friend, and Carden seems like a sweetheart. I like that you haven't demonised his girlfriend, too, because that is seriously one of my biggest pet peeves in stories. I'm interested to see why Jayson likes Carden since all the interaction they've had so far is the exchange of glances in that one class, and I'd really like to see what Carden's feelings towards Jayson are, but I'm assuming all that's coming since this is just an intro. But yeah, like bonfirefighter. said, I'd love to see how it all comes together. :D
    June 26th, 2011 at 11:36pm
  • southpaw

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    Oy, I'm so glad I found this. It's only two chapters in, and I'm already addicted. :D
    You've introduced the characters well so far, and I can't wait to see more of Carden and if Jayson will ever get him. The way you've written the dialogue is very natural and they sound like real high school kids talking.
    I can't wait for it all to come together. I'm definitely subscribing. :D
    June 26th, 2011 at 09:25pm
  • matthuee.

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    Is Steph preggie, hence why he puked?
    Cause, ya'know... :O!
    Aw, Jayson makes me so sad :(
    June 24th, 2011 at 05:57pm
  • notrelevant

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    This is a lovely story, but I can't help but laugh because I read it whilst listening to "Can't Touch This" by MC Hammer :3
    June 24th, 2011 at 03:21am
  • exhaling dreams

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    I'm a bit confused, but I think I'm getting it?
    So, is Jayson the "popular" guy or the guy who makes fun of Carden
    er something?
    I like your descriptions and your grammar is right on.
    Good beginning, and I'm glad it doesn't jump to the point,
    a lot of stories on here are.
    I like it to lead up to the interesting parts.
    I'll definitely subscribe, this story has potential ! (:
    June 23rd, 2011 at 10:23pm
  • rochelle

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    I would love to see what the characters look like. :)
    June 23rd, 2011 at 09:18pm
  • call me by your name

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    yeah post pics! =)
    June 23rd, 2011 at 08:34pm
  • you'rethesecretikeep

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    hmm....interesting.

    lmao subscribed (: :3
    June 23rd, 2011 at 05:18pm
  • william.

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    I'm going to be like everyone else by only saying one word... Interesting.

    Wow, that's almost too boring for me. If you don't continuing writing I promise you I'm gonna cry... CRY. xD
    June 23rd, 2011 at 12:54pm
  • yurio

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    interesting.
    June 22nd, 2011 at 05:43am
  • matthuee.

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    Sounds interesting.
    June 20th, 2011 at 01:11am
  • JessLoui

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    y'know, i think ill subscribe to this...i love original slash stories and this looks like its gunna be pretty damned cool
    June 19th, 2011 at 05:12pm
  • call me by your name

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    sounds fun :]
    is it gonna be in two pov's?
    June 19th, 2011 at 10:11am
  • Hale_Pack

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    I like this.
    Update soon!
    June 19th, 2011 at 04:03am
  • Kupo

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    This sounds so cute(:
    More soon!
    June 18th, 2011 at 11:25pm
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