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  • pretty ood

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    Update, and I'll show you how to fly.
    October 21st, 2009 at 02:30pm
  • Amy;;

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    I love this story. There are only 3 stories (of the ones I have read) on this site that I think are great. This is one of them.

    What was with the last sentance of the last chapter?
    December 10th, 2008 at 05:08am
  • coffee whore

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    Honey, I really love this story. It is so great. I'm loving all the imagery and the emotions placed into this one little update. I am greatly anticipating the next part. I love this story, everything about it is captivating. Your writing is amazing and you should be proud. It is really great.

    xoxo
    Mona
    December 1st, 2008 at 06:31am
  • Amy;;

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    Wow, im impressed, that was a very long update. I like how you explained alot in this chapter.
    Cant wait till the next one.
    November 19th, 2008 at 04:23am
  • coffee whore

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    What I have said a million times before, I will gladly say it a million times again. I love your writing and you are so good at it.

    You imagery is wonderful. I can see and feel everything that is happening. You describe it all with little revelation, yet I understand it all. I am always so happy whenever I see that you update this story because it is so spectacularly written! I love everything about this. The writing style is perfect, the imagery is great, and you can actually get pulled in to everything that is happening. I don't mind the wait either, I know it takes a long time to get everything just the way you want it to be. This is really one of my favourite stories, and I can NOT wait for the next update. I am seriously shaking here from anticipation. I love your writing style and your story. I just love you! ^_^

    xoxo
    Mona <3
    November 17th, 2008 at 03:18am
  • Jesus_Of_Port_Toilet

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    Urg.
    I adore how you tell us everything, but nothing at the same time.
    I'm desperate to know what happened... and what may be happening again.
    I'm basically addicted to this. <3

    I loved that chapter, seeing Gerard's pain as everything around him grew up and perished while he stayed young, unable to escape from a tradgedy that he couldn't understand.

    Gah. ILY!
    Beth
    xoxo
    November 16th, 2008 at 11:54pm
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    Oh man, oh man, oh man.
    Can you get anymore awesome?

    That was so sweet/hot.
    Perfect mix.

    I adore this so much. Nice work!
    Luuurved the update.
    Beth
    xoxo
    September 17th, 2008 at 07:32pm
  • Gee'slilsis

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    Awwz!!
    That was really really sweet!!!
    No doubt it was hot but totally sweet!!
    Frankie and Gerard care so much about eachother!!
    The flashbacks are my fave parts!!
    Mostly b/c the 'present' ones confuse me....
    More soon???
    September 17th, 2008 at 06:03pm
  • Amy;;

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    I have been a really crappy reader, just reading and not commenting.
    Well, im going to change that now! I have been subscribed to this story for ages, and I really like it.
    I like how you did the last chapter, you explained exactly what was going on without being smutty, which i kinda hard to do.
    Keep the chapters coming!
    September 16th, 2008 at 05:39am
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    Awww jeeze... I adore this so.
    It's friggin' amazing! So damn original and written with a very unique writing style - I'm loving it!
    You mentioned that we may not understand what's going on, but that just adds to what I love about this story - the fact that not everything is revealed at the once, it takes a few chapters for the reader to be certain.
    I'm thinking I know kind of what's going on, but I could be totally wrong - and I love that, it just keeps you guessing.
    Maybe that's what makes it so addicting too?
    Basically, I am in love with this - head over heels in love. I want to marry it and have it's babies.
    Amazingly well written, nice work!
    September 10th, 2008 at 12:12am
  • keepthefaith.x

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    Hehe, at least their mother's aren't mad!!

    and I feel bad for Mikey....

    I think he has a crush on Frankles?

    Update Spoon!
    Hehe :3

    Nah, Mikey isn't crushing on Frankie. He just wishes that they were better friends :P

    I just realised that I forgot about the beta thing :|
    August 19th, 2008 at 01:56pm
  • Unapologetic Apathy

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    Hehe, at least their mother's aren't mad!!

    and I feel bad for Mikey....

    I think he has a crush on Frankles?

    Update Spoon!
    August 19th, 2008 at 09:53am
  • Gee'slilsis

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    ZOMG!
    I thought they was gonna be in for it for a second..
    Then I was all pfew maybe not!
    But then the sex came up and Gerard yelled,
    I was all oh no now Gerard'll be in for it!
    -smiles- but everything ended well!!
    Loved the end bit!
    Cheesy, Candy-coated, Cliché stuff!!
    It gives me a warm fuzzy feeling XD

    Update Soon Please!!
    August 17th, 2008 at 09:37pm
  • keepthefaith.x

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    Rooberri:
    Awesome work once again paigery~<333
    Poor Gee he needs lotsa huggles.
    Geat descriptions aswell
    Thanks EmEm <33333333
    August 14th, 2008 at 12:35am
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    Awesome work once again paigery~<333
    Poor Gee he needs lotsa huggles.
    Geat descriptions aswell
    August 13th, 2008 at 12:50pm
  • Unapologetic Apathy

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    Page claim!

    I dub thee....

    BETA FISH! BETA FISH! They are oh so pretty, BETA FISH!

    Image
    August 11th, 2008 at 05:03am
  • Unapologetic Apathy

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    x.S.o.r.r.o.w.s.x:
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    He smiled into Frank's hair, nuzzling his nose inside the mass of ivory, and just soaking him in, never wanting to let go.
    Ivory means white...

    I think you mean Ebony. Which is black

    hehe, yay!! They goes on a date!

    Update Spoon!
    Haha, I just realised that *Blushes* Thanks for that, I'll go correct it now :D

    ...Maybe I should get a beta, I've been thinking about that for a while now... :?
    *pokes and moves back a little*

    Hi!
    August 11th, 2008 at 05:01am
  • Unapologetic Apathy

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    Why can't Gee sing anymore?

    is it to do with Frankles??

    *huggles Gee*

    I hope things get better, love.

    Update Spoon!
    August 11th, 2008 at 05:01am
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    He smiled into Frank's hair, nuzzling his nose inside the mass of ivory, and just soaking him in, never wanting to let go.
    Ivory means white...

    I think you mean Ebony. Which is black

    hehe, yay!! They goes on a date!

    Update Spoon!
    Haha, I just realised that *Blushes* Thanks for that, I'll go correct it now :D

    ...Maybe I should get a beta, I've been thinking about that for a while now... :?
    August 4th, 2008 at 12:09pm
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    He smiled into Frank's hair, nuzzling his nose inside the mass of ivory, and just soaking him in, never wanting to let go.
    Ivory means white...

    I think you mean Ebony. Which is black

    hehe, yay!! They goes on a date!

    Update Spoon!
    August 4th, 2008 at 02:20am
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