Peppermint Drugs - Comments

I really loved this, I swear when I read;

"I miss you."

The person who isn't him grunts, doesn't understand, doesn't care

I almost cried.

It put a nice picture in my head and it was well done over all. The flow was a bit off for my taste and I didn't quite get if he was have a hallucination or it was really a person and he was just pretending it was Brendon.

But, my favorite part had to be the last two lines. They're very dominant/submissive and I have quite a soft spot for things like that.

The layout was pretty and the colors matched, only I would find a way to have it either one picture or two at the top. The third picture cutting in doesn't look very good, in my opinion.

But, with that said, it's nice overall and I really enjoyed it. Good job.

AHHH! IMPLIED RYDON! I KNEW WE WERE MEANT TO BE BUDDIES ^.^

okay, okay, kae must calm down and review now. it was beautiful, absolutely beautiful. the part that goes, "I miss you."

The person who isn't him grunts, doesn't understand, doesn't care.

it's just pointing out that ryan understands that his standards for everyone else are lower than they are for him. i like the emphasis on peppermint, dear. i can literally smell that combination of scents. it's sickening and sad, you're just amazing ^.^