Stand - Comments

The layout is f*cking amazing. And I always love reading stories with good layouts. for some reason just looking at the layout makes me judge how good the story is gonna be, though I probably shouldn't look at it that way, but I can't help it.

And the story matched the layout. It was amazing.

I noticed only one mistake. but she didn't sem to have the strength. Probably should put another 'e' in one of them words ;D

Okay, so I love your description, and the way you make each sentence really dramatic and still have it work. Normally you wouldn't really want every sentence to be all dramatic but you make it work. The way you say a sentence and then one word all to itself.

And the ending was also brilliant. I felt that this story was very...like, complete, you know? Just enough information and not too little description. Just, perfect!

So yeah, I loved it. You should keep writing, you're very good at it. :)

Wow. First of all, you responded to the contest so quickly! You're still the only one who has even signed up!

This was amazing, to say the least. Your syntax and abstract opening was extremely captivating. Your pathos and strong use of repetition really applies to the plot perfectly. You are truly a magnificent writer; I am so glad you chose this quote. You incorporated the meaning in with such a strong sense. The bonding appeal and emotional factors really make your images vivid.

Thank you so much for signing up for my contest - this is one of the greatest things I have ever read.

=O I wanted to cry. This was beautiful, love. Such emotion. Such raw emotion. It made me think of my feelings for when my own grandmother (may her beautiful soul rest in peace with her golden angel wings) passed away. I was so devastated that I didn't know what to feel. I felt like I was left behind to pick up the pieces of our family and wasn't able to turn to anyone; not even myself.

I really adored how you posted a single word between each paragraph. I think it added depth to the story and made the meaning even stronger. I didn't catch any mistakes, so you really did an outstanding job on this. I love you for writing it. <3

Oh, look, I just started crying ='P Now I need to go get a tissue. God, dear, you are so amazing.
Keep writing, love!

<3Forever&Always,
Serena Frost<3

Ahhh! The title and summary reminded me a bit of the song 'Stand' by Rascall Flatts (Gotta love them <3)

Yes, I agree, lif is a struggle. Aha, this will be wonderful, dear! I can't wait to see what you have in store

<3