Breathless - Comments

No, I didn't just re-read this and cry...

Beautiful! I honestly loved it, and the characters' relationship was nothing short of adorable. Also, you were amazing at portraying Patrice and that was just fantastic.

Amazing job. <3

that was amazing and it was the perfect sequel thing to ur other story... though, i think a FULL SEQUEL with MORE THAN ONE CHAPTER is due from u... i wanna know what happens to them... anyway, i LOVED this... like i love all ur stories...

YAYAYAYYAY a wedding there best be a full sequel to this or i am going to be crushed

even though I am Canadian and the Bruins beat my flyers i am still happy they won i hate Vancouver

I love this. Is there going to be a sequel to this one shot? Cause I would totally read it.

Her fingers played with the hem of her too long, too big jersey she wore to every game.
^ idk that just seemed really cute and your details make me imagine everything(:

I like Amanda ha ha so like it's good writing if you can make someone like one of the characters(:

I like how it like talks about what each team member means to her

they are a really cute couple ha ha(:

his impossibly sexy smile never leaving his clean shaven face.
^ I found that cute for some reason ha ha

This story was really cute(: I liked it(: The Pittsburgh Penguins are better though :P

First, let me just get something out of the way: I love you, I love you, I love you! When you first told me that it was a possibility that you would write this I prayed and prayed that the possibility would become a reality and what do you know, a few days later and it is! You're amazing for that. Now down to business.

I loved this so much. It was so cute and so perfect and just captured pretty much everything I really did feel when the B's won perfectly. It hasn't even sunk in yet completely but you did such a wonderful job at hitting the nail on the head, again that I just... I can't even. This really painted a clear picture and was so beautifully written and full of great emotion that I'm just pretty much speechless. You know how much I loved Rules and this is right up there with it now. I'm just.. I'm in awe. I've still got butterflies and I'm smiling like an idiot. I just.. amazing. I loved every bit of it, especially the part where story me and Patrice are engaged and he wants to get married asap :D

I'm sorry. This isn't even concise and doesn't really describe my thoughts as accurately as I want but I'm just flying high from the cuteness and perfectness of the oneshot. I loved it so much. Only downside is I want more more more! /greedy. Bottom line: amazing, beautifully written, and so so accurate. I loved it! And you! Thank you<3

A couple of weeks ago I read There Are Still Rules To Break in one night and fell in love with it. Your writing is amazing, very detailed and paints an actual picture in my mind. I nearly screamed when I saw that you had added a little sequel. This was sweet and just all around made me smile. I love Patrice and Amanda together. This was a great addition to the series. <3