Bare Naked - Comments

Prize Comment #1 (TeeHee)

This was good...I like your writing style. I really connected with Kandi, and how she changed when she met Logan. Your writing style let us see everything perfectly. I liked the imagery you used for Logan's bedroom; it fit very well with the story and it was great. Keep up teh great writing, I really liked it. :)

Btw something I say you could change is it is hard to read this in "written for this contest" and "prompt" and "things I'd never do, words i'd never say" without highlighting.

I really like the name Kandi, it's unique

I think this plot is cute of what I read so far. I think it's cute that she jumped from guy to guy before but he changed her. It's cute that there is a person for everyone.

I read it all now and it was cute and I liked it(:

btw i really like the picture and background and color of the font and stuff it all looks really great together(:

Well I totally agree with this:
"It's easy to take off your clothes and have sex.
People do it all the time.
But opening up your soul to someone,
letting them into your spirit, thoughts, fears, future, hopes, dreams...
that is being naked."

And it also makes me want to read this(: So that's what I'm going to do(: