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  • cowa00552

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    Good job! I can't wait to see how they handle having a child in their lives
    July 2nd, 2011 at 07:41pm
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    I love it! Update soon!
    July 2nd, 2011 at 06:09am
  • cowa00552

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    Holy crap! This chapter was crazy amazing!! :)
    July 2nd, 2011 at 05:55am
  • MusicMania87

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    I absolutely loved this last chapter because you really got a look into Alex's job as a DA and how her schedule balances Brent's.
    July 1st, 2011 at 01:03am
  • missann10

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    Ah I can't believe it is his! Love it can't wait to see what happens next!
    June 30th, 2011 at 06:08am
  • KayPx3

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    cant believe brent has a kid cant wait to see where this goes
    June 30th, 2011 at 02:37am
  • weasleychick09

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    I love this twist on things! Definitely one I have never read before! I am glad that Alex was so accepting of everything. But it would have been silly of her to be mad you can't help things that have already happened. Can't wait for your next update! I am off to update my story!
    Amanda
    June 29th, 2011 at 06:11am
  • cowa00552

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    Wow that put quite the spin on things!
    June 29th, 2011 at 02:42am
  • KayPx3

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    again loved the ending line :] this is crazy cant wait to find out whats next
    June 29th, 2011 at 01:18am
  • Breakneckorange

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    I agree the not freaking out part is interesting, but really nice. I can't wait to see what happens...I'm not sure if I want it to be his kid or not :)
    June 29th, 2011 at 12:58am
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    oooh a twist in the story, love it and i am glad she is not freaking out about it.
    June 29th, 2011 at 12:34am
  • weasleychick09

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    Aww it was sweet! So they are basically engaged to be engaged right? :) lol But it was good girl! I can't wait for some more!
    Amanda
    June 28th, 2011 at 07:09pm
  • missann10

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    Adorable chapter and I loved the promise ring :)
    June 28th, 2011 at 07:20am
  • cowa00552

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    Love these chapters! I can't say this enough.... Alex and Brent are so cute!!! :) I love that he gave her a promise ring :) <3
    June 28th, 2011 at 04:22am
  • KayPx3

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    cute chapter i liked the promise ring :]
    June 28th, 2011 at 01:55am
  • Breakneckorange

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    I really like this story its sooo CUTE :)
    June 27th, 2011 at 08:51pm
  • missann10

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    love it!!! update soon, i cant wait to see their relationship build :)
    June 27th, 2011 at 01:32am
  • MusicMania87

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    This story is amazing and I love the part at the end were you were talking about his mother's eyes glistening. This story is amazing and I hope in the future you plan to do more Chicago Blackhawk stories.
    June 26th, 2011 at 02:44am
  • missann10

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    aw this is so cute, i love his family. cant wait for more!
    June 25th, 2011 at 08:09am
  • cowa00552

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    Ouu intriguing ! ;) no pun intended. I love his family and how they love Alex . :) can't wait for more
    June 25th, 2011 at 06:31am