Bittersweet - Comments

the imagery and description is absolutely beautiful, as is the picture at the top of the layout (a banner?). the layout is simple, but beautiful. i loved how the words seemed so well chosen and how it was written. it is a lovely fantasy story so far and i hope to read on further. :D

Ciara seemed to be a slightly spoiled character, at least... that's what i gathered. i could be wrong though. grammar and spelling were both fine, i saw no errors in that category. i wish i could help, but i couldn't find anything that needed to be fixed. i mean, the story length is excellent (i'm always told never to exceed a certain page count), the imagery and detail are so beautiful, as are the character's different styles of speech. you can tell who is speaking and that's great! in a good deal of stories it's hard to tell the difference.

i do also love the contrast between characters, how it switches off between chapters. one of them is from the world of humans, while the other is from Faiery.

i enjoyed this greatly, and i hope to read further as the story progresses. definately subscribing. i'm happy to have found such a beautiful fantasy~

I love this so far:) The words flow perfectly and your imagery makes me have a crisp image planted in my head of the setting and story! Can't wait for the next chapter!

wow I...I really like this.

That layout is just haunting, I can't even look at that picture without getting chills.

I love your choice of wording, the little subtleties here and there that hint at what her village thinks of her and what she thinks of herself.

I will definitely subscribe to this~