Sweet deal =D thank you =D i can see how it would make it harder =) now i just got to figure out how to fix it xD
June 18th, 2011 at 07:45am
This story is very good, well written, interesting story plot.
I just can't get myself to read past chapter one because it's so difficult for me.D:
I love this truly, but it's all one big blob and it gives me a headache trying.
Perhaps, to aid the readers, you could separate the paragraphs to make it easier to follow?
That would be my only critic.