i just read the whole thing and I actually like it! the only thing I"d change is maybe the layout i do like the background being Zack though :) i like how everyone is kind of connected here Zack and Avelynn had sex before shane and her got together how Chris thinks of Zack as a second dad and Shane is his dad and the whole movie night thing was pretty cute and the questions make me wonder.. ;) all in all, i think it's a really good story with a good plot, but maybe re read over some stuff because I saw some misspellings :) but I think I'm going to subscribe and see where this goes great job so far :D!
the only thing I"d change is maybe the layout
i do like the background being Zack though :)
i like how everyone is kind of connected here
Zack and Avelynn had sex before shane and her got together
how Chris thinks of Zack as a second dad and Shane is his dad
and the whole movie night thing was pretty cute and the questions make me wonder.. ;)
all in all, i think it's a really good story with a good plot,
but maybe re read over some stuff because I saw some misspellings :)
but I think I'm going to subscribe and see where this goes
great job so far :D!