I'll Stop the Whole World - Comments

this is really really good! and I love Tayley sooooo you should make it one. :) keep up the good work!

I like this!
Its well written, but I agree with what the person above me said... could have dragged out the songwriting for 'Monster' a little bit longer.
Taylor and Hayley make the most adorable couple.
I think it would be great it you went a little deeper into when the Farros left.. like have some flashbacks or something. Hayley could have them as a bad dream? Like flashback to some arguments or some of the bad times... just adds a whole new level of depth.
I love this, I'm subscribing :D
Can't wait for more! xx
P.S. Your layout is fabulous, its really clear and crisp, and I love the banner too!

1) Taylor and Hayley would be such a cute couple from the looks of it
2) The song Monster was written way too quickly. That could've been something prolonged through the story or at least a few chapters
3) It's well written and the grammar/spelling were good, so thumbs up for that :)
I'll keep reading!

OHMYGOSH. WHY ARE THERE NO COMMENTS ON THIS?
This story is uh-maz-ing! I can't believe it's your first Paramore fic! You are seriously talented. There aren't a lot of paramore fics on mibba, let alone one's that take place after the split of the Farro brothers (besides mine - lol). I seriously loved this. Your writing style is incredible. I felt everything that Hayley felt. Everything was written so realistically, that I actually felt like I was reading a LEGIT recount of what ACTUALLY happened. Just amazing. I am seriously jealous of your mad skills. I'm also very impressed with the way you worked the song 'monster' into it. I never thought about it being about the Farro brothers, but I think you may be right! You are very, extremely, amazingly, talented and awesome and you deserve like 274578254 more comments. I'm going to mention this story in the next author's note of my paramore story. You deserve more comments and readers and subscribers! You better look out! I'm your new biggest fan! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE update soon! By the way, your layout and banner are gorgeous and your spelling and grammar is spot-on. I'm pretty sure you're superwoman. Okay. Bye! :D