Ripples - Comments

i DO like the layout but it not being centered is bothering me as per usual
but the runner of the contest said she liked that so don't change it haha
but the link color being the regular blue looks weird with all the green
i like how much you explained the pond and how she felt as if it was beautiful
i don't know what this incident is but it's making her thin so it's making me worry almost
oh jeez of course it's what i feared, she's starving herself :/
but this makes the story more relatable i believe, that desperate need to be beautiful is apparent here
though the ending wasn't necessarily happy i felt like it was
kind of showing how she WILL get better :)
very godo job!

I really liked this(: Good job

Contest

I like the layout. Most people don't put the story off to the side, so I really liked that part (:

As for the story, it was very interesting. I had not expected this kind of story from such a picture, and I admire that. I like how you used the ripples as a sort of metaphor. It was a very good story, with very few grammatical mistakes. Good job!

Your details are good(: they make me imagine everything(:

I love the picture(: and now I shall go read the story

AN ORIGINAL FINALLY.

I really liked the description in this, although there were a lot of run on sentences. The layout is also gorgeous, and I liked the way you used "ripples".