i loved it before but i love it even more now it ALMOST makes me want to go back and look at cb&sb and like edit the shit outta them im so fucking nostalgic right now fuck
Wow it was really really good and real you know? Like some people are all happy go lucky in their stories, the only thing their characters really have to worry about is what they are having for dinner. But with Stone (even though you didn't write his past andy did) you still managed to convey that he had you know...issues. And i think that's the hardest part cause some people try but they just can't seem to wrap their head around the fact that situations like this do happen. and it comes out sounding fake and as if they are just writting cause someone told them too and not for themselves. SO anyways very good and i hope you make more stories like this. Short and sweet.
Lisa, this is AMAZING. and that bit with Adam, unexpected and awesome. this whole one-shot is perfect and i honestly think you could possibly write the third installment following after spring back in which you follow stone's pov. gah. i can't... i can't even-- it's just a;lskdjfa;sldkjjfasldkf. so perfect. I love it and i think you did such a great job. you really captured a lot of the silent worrying that happens in stone's mind but not all the stuff that necessarily comes out of his mouth. so perfect. and that mentioning of Stan was awesome as well. just....everything pretty much.
Andy stop you're gonna make me cry!
(For real though I'd love to see that!! I can't imagine it being any more flawless tbh)